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My Day
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:21:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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waking
smiling
talking
laughing
loving
caring
grinning
whining
anger
yelling
hurting
silence
frowning
thinking
crying
alone
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PsychoticDreamz
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2004-05-27 01:21:14]
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Re: My Day
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:01:19 AM AEST
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well i hafta give you credit on being original. itd make a good chorus. good write none the less, keep it up
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Re: My Day
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by Whisper on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 12:34:58 AM AEST
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Well thats straight to the point .Clear- no exaggeration I trust ?
( perhap a pee break in there LOL. Food too no doubt.)
Nice piece of work that. :-) Pretty much sums up my day . LOL
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