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Feelings Bleed
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Feelings Bleed
My soul is bleeding
My heart is bleeding
My mind is bleeding
My self is bleeding
Everything bleeding
I can't stop this feeling
You caused this feeling
I'm slowly dying
My tears won't stop crying
As they stream down in lines
And my life is not mine
I pay the price of life
I'll pay with life's darkness
I enter into death
And there is nothing left
And I die away
And I fade away
I say good-bye
And I say good-bye
And that is my life
And I pay the price
And that's the ending
Of my beginning
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essentially9
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2004-05-26 21:40:25]
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Re: Feelings Bleed
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:31:14 PM AEST
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seems very succinct and brutal... I loved it.
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Re: Feelings Bleed
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by bite_me on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:37:01 AM AEST
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Hey, really love your poem, i know exactly how u feel :/
Ella
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Re: Feelings Bleed
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by pixie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:58:32 AM AEST
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very direct and hard hitting, well done, things will get better as time goes by (((HUGS)))
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