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Poetry In A Box
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:36:19 PM in AEST
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He took the poetry I had given him
And stuffed it, carelessly, in a box
I made him leave his keys behind
But still think I’ll change the locks
He left the pictures, old and dear
They didn’t even cross his mind
I think I will cut him out of some
Memories then I can redesign
He left the trinkets and souvenirs
Of the trips that we took back then
Places that used to mean so much
I doubt we’ll ever see again
What each of us wanted most
Seemed to be at far opposite end
Everything seemed so easily divided
No more do we argue or pretend
It is only the poetry that I regret
I just couldn’t ask for it back though
Trapped in a box in his new home
I desperately miss it so
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:43:22 PM AEST
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this breaks my heart..... i know what goes into each piece, a part of you. i hope you have copies, if not, i think you should ask for them back.
the voice
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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Yes, this is sad poetry.
sadness pours from each line.
well written |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by bttrflynajar on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:20:29 PM AEST
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| very nice poem, you are very creative with your words. i enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:54:43 PM AEST
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yes i can relate to this one. Chin up Brigther days ahead.
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:49:03 AM AEST
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| Can imagine this scenario so well ... and yes, the poetry would be the most painful thing to lose, but probably totally lost on him ... such a waste. Great write ... Jan |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by brigitte7735 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:13:30 PM AEST
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omg this is so beautiful and so deadly right on...love it so much
Vanessa |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by Sylvias on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:21:58 PM AEST
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| Sad. I like it. |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:23:15 AM AEST
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Hmn. You should ask for it back, even if it means facing an unwanted situation. Its yours - not his . . . unless of course, you want him to stumble upon it at a much later date and regret your breakup at their obvious meaning and thorough evocation.
Just my two cents. I hadn't read this one before, and got intrigued. Glad I did.
Thanks for sharing this one - its now kept in a much better place than his home, where it'll be appreciated far more by more appreciative people . . . |
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Re: Poetry In A Box
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 03:57:59 AM AEST
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This is soooo incredibly sad but yes, very creative. There's so much I'd like to say but it's so after the fact it probably doesn't matter much any more.
*sighs*
You really really are an incredible poet.
Timber |
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