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GOING UNDER
Contributed by
thegurl
on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:24:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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YOU DISPLAYED
GOOD TRAITS THOUGH FEW
THIS DISEASE
KEEPS PULLING ME DOWN
I REALIZE
I CAN’T TRUST YOU
YOUR SUCH A COMFORTABLE LIAR
TRYING TO BREAK THROUGH
INTO MY SOUL
I’M FALLING FOREVER
THE PRICE I PAY
FOR BELIEVING YOU
YOUR DISEASE
PASSED ON TO ME
NOW I LIE CONTINUOUSLY
I THOUGHT
TIME ALONE WOULD TELL
NOW I KNOW
YOU’RE SO MUCH MORE THAN HUMAN
AND BECAUSE I WON’T CONDEMN
DISPOSABLE MEN
AND BECAUSE I CAN’T WITHSTAND
THE SUFFERING THAT’S KEEP INSIDE
I WISH I HAD YOUR FAULTS
NOTHING SEEMS TO PHASE YOU
I CAN'T KEEP GOING UNDER
I CAN'T BELIEVE IN MYSELF ANYMORE
BEHIND EVERY LIE THERE'S A BURDEN
AND BECAUSE I'M RESISTING YOU BUT
STILL DROWNING IN YOU
YOU SCREAM
WELL GO ON AND SCREAM AT ME
I WON'T BE BROKEN AGAIN
I'VE GOT TO BREAK THROUGH
THE SURFACE SEEMS SO FAR AWAY
I'M FALLING AGAIN
UNDER YOUR SPELL.
Copyright ©
thegurl
... [
2004-05-26 20:24:14]
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Re: GOING UNDER
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:49:34 PM AEST
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sucks? not hardly! i felt myself losing the ability to breathe, drowning with you. stand tall and break free!!
Great write.
the voice
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Re: GOING UNDER
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:02:33 PM AEST
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| This would sound a lot better coming from Amy Lee, but thanks for the read. |
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Re: GOING UNDER
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:12:57 PM AEST
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sounds sad to me.be stronge and stand tall.
good write. |
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