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The Blank Page
Contributed by
Archie
on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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"The start of a friendship" some one says
They know how much I want to be one
so the stories begin on an unwritten page
the ideals and things that become us.
So do you want a blank page
a partition to write on of our escapades?
How we argued and growed;
how good faith was bestowed
and some one else looks on and reads it.
Why should I make things easy
if you know so much about me?
Why can't we struggle
like every other animal in life?
When things are bought
and incur no cost
the value of them are just ice!
So I fill another page in this volume
and another comes wanting more.
He says "Give me your heart
that love may impart
good will and godspeed between us
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-05-26 20:03:54]
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Re: The Blank Page
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:43:56 AM AEST
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Fantastic start Archie, well written poem.
A friendship so knowing, a friendship to dwell. Good Luck
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Re: The Blank Page
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by reilt on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:35:12 AM AEST
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| brilliant poem...i just thought it was amazing. thank you for posting it. |
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Re: The Blank Page
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:05:38 PM AEST
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| superb mate well done - nice piece! |
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Re: The Blank Page
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:44:40 AM AEST
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Something to think about on this summer morning, well done very good poetry.
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Re: The Blank Page
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by bernard on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:20:07 PM AEST
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Full marks for very good poem. Keep them coming.
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