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The Earth Experiment
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Emotions on display
as crippled pilgrims run
in circles
dazed and confused
searching
for elusive love,
night becomes day
the moon is replaced by the sun
ancient mysteries remain
answers to questions
are never enough.
So many crossroads
the choices
of rituals and routines
are so insane
still we dream
and believe
in love,
no one really knows
how to navigate
the maze
so we go on
with little pleasures
and heartbreaking pain.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-05-26 19:58:40]
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:03:47 PM AEST
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Very Well Written Secretwind !!!! I Liked It ...
Keep Em Coming !!!!
Love , Hugs & God Bless :-)
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:19:07 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:33:45 AM AEST
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Hi darlin,
Very good writing.
I think we all can relate to this one.
luv ya,
emy |
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by full_blur on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:54:06 PM AEST
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Great write,
drew me in from the title and I was spellbounded... You have an interesting take on daily life and describe it very well. |
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:07:19 AM AEST
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Great poem Secretwind,
No guidance so to speak, and people all run around to seek........love, and to be loved, and yet so few really know how.......I liked the ending to your poem.....it's a heartbreaking plan with much pain is what it is!
Good write about daily life.....honest too
love
consue |
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Re: The Earth Experiment
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:31:50 PM AEST
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this is beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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