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Uncertain
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:26:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Traverse the straight and narrow
Rocky slope to slip and slide
Unsure of where my feet take me
Uncertain of the destination
Should I lean on you or walk alone
Who can I trust
Row the boat all by myself
Sometimes in circles
No direction or port of call
Uncertain of the destination
Tides will take me where they will
Who can I believe
Sit alone at the corner table
Sipping wine with thoughts of you
Undisturbed in solitude
Uncertain of the destination
Love has failed me once again
Who can I turn to
~~**~~
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merry
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2004-05-26 18:26:41]
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Re: Uncertain
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:48:29 PM AEST
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A universal feeling expressed only as you can. Tight, concise, and full.
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Re: Uncertain
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:19:33 PM AEST
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| yes, a universal feeling indeed, you successfully describe so seemly simply what many have tried before and failed, including myself |
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Re: Uncertain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:32:01 PM AEST
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Interesting, it makes me feel sad and yet angry at the same time......
I like it very much
Thanks merry |
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Re: Uncertain
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by Beautifully-Imperfect on
Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 01:41:58 AM AEST
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| I got the vibe, very nice. |
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