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Fog
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:07:00 PM in AEST
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The fog wrapped tight
Around this beautiful city
Slowly lifts and takes flight
From the force of this site
A smart man once said:
"A day without laughter's like a night without stars"
The horse is no longer being led
I can't see the stars from bed
But as the fog lifts I can enjoy
The world and it's power
All those horrible sites I bann
All those ones made by man
The fog lifts, I see their light
Majestic beauty for all to see
It cuts through this dreary night
I'm gonna make it through this... I might...
Jaime Moran
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2004-05-26 18:07:00]
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Re: Fog
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:14:53 PM AEST
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Excellent metaphor, with the fog. I live in rainy coastal Oregon, so I see a lot of mist. It has always enchanted me, so it makes this piece the more compelling...
Well done!
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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beautiful poem. I am glad you are able to see the sun after your depression has lifted if that is indeed what its about. I liked the mood of this poem 'twas great.
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Re: Fog
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:35:09 PM AEST
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yes I do understand this but my fog is still thick Im looking for something beyond that fog though well done!
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Re: Fog
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:36:26 PM AEST
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| great write. i have been where you are. congradulations on getting through the "fog". it's tough to do but once it's done it's worth the fight. |
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Re: Fog
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:19:06 PM AEST
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| "The horse is no longer being led." that says it all when the fog lifts...good write. |
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Re: Fog
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:01:49 AM AEST
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Not much fog in the mountains of Wyoming, but I've been in fogs in Washington state where you couldn't see your hands infront of you.
I loved your poem......it was very interesting, and painted beautiful pictures in my time.
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Re: Fog
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:49:22 AM AEST
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Excellent write from the master, once more. Sometimes you make me soooo jealous *sniffles* lol. Love ya really, this is beautiful.
Your sis
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Re: Fog
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:21:44 PM AEST
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this is so pretty.... love the last line!!!
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