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Memo
Contributed by
Daniel
on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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waiting up on a progress...
potent filler in the excess...
condemned in the advancement
well i guess you'll have to chance it
so your saturnine expression will start to change
time
has been taking you down
has been rusting your metal crown
and i don't think you realize
that life's just too short to not enjoy
a dive
has no chance to turn around
has the chance to hit concrete ground
when this pool is empty yet again
new memo to self...
up for shellacs in proximity...
seeming pointless to epitome...
castrated in new regressments
i told you to make your reassessments
your sabbactical will be postponed definitively
this time
has taken you down
has rusted your metal crown
and you still don't realize
life's too short to not enjoy
dive
no chance to turn around
the chance to hit concrete ground
pool is empty yet again
new memo to self...
i hear insights coming round...
it's such a beautiful sound...
you should be well on your way...
just don't leave your mainstay...
because it's the lifeline now your
time
has been taking you right down
has been rusting your little metal crown
and i don't think that you realize
that life's just way too short to not enjoy
this dive
has no chance for you to turn around
has the chance that you hit concrete ground
when this pool is empty yet again
new memo to self...
the only way to a better health...
***
(10/10/02)
Copyright ©
Daniel
... [
2002-10-11 09:45:00]
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Re: Memo
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 11:59:43 AM AEST
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Hi Daniel,
Very good write here, my friend!!!!
PEAC, LUV, MEMO'S,
emy |
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Re: Memo
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by Lia on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 09:50:31 AM AEST
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| Daniel..you have always had a knack for making my brain work...I love your work :) |
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