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It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
Contributed by
Elena
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Darling, if you’ll remember correctly:
It wasn’t pale moonlight, but fading neon.
It wasn’t a kiss but a thrust.
It wasn’t a waltz; it was footwork.
It wasn’t my name you called out in the dark, but 911.
How can I make promises while you’re keeping score?
The bottom line is: a sabre’s distance
Is too close for comfort in a duel
But light years away in love.
Yet both require dancing slippers
And gloves.
Copyright ©
Elena
... [
2004-05-26 17:45:41]
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:51:07 PM AEST
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Now, this is a write that is full and yet mysterious enough to make me want more.
Fascinating.
Stitch |
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:23:16 AM AEST
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| Mmm, very interesting write ... I like it ... Jan |
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by pixie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:43:54 AM AEST
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Yes this was a very intresting poem,
>>>>Yet both require dancing slippers
And gloves.
Loved these last 2 lines :)
pixie xx |
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:02:18 PM AEST
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| I hope the out of touch lover in this poem gets the message. Great write 5 stars |
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by Juliet on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:04:12 PM AEST
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Wow, I really love this. It intigues me.
"How can I make promises while you’re keeping score?"
Great line. Great poem! |
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Re: It Wasn’t A Love Affaire, It Was A Duel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:33:55 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. Not too heavy on the emotion, and just enough mystery to make it an interesting read.
I didn't care for the 911, but the meaning was cool.
Nice poem
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