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Stranded in Good-byes
Contributed by
Soulless
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Too long has the night’s sky kept me blind
I can’t seem to place all that I’ve left behind
All was given up for sacrifices
So I say good morning
And then goodnight
So good morning to the face of dawn
Time to brace the lies
I don’t belong
The last day to see the sun rise
Or watch it fall
And leave me here behind
Hands cup around bitter warmth
I envy you who holds the light
Given up all I’ve bartered for
And kiss it all good-bye
So good morning to the face of dawn
Time to brace the lies
I don’t belong
Subtleties have pulled me down
I best awake before I drown
I don’t belong
I don’t belong here
I must move on
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2004-05-26 17:42:40]
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Re: Stranded in Good-byes
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:12:53 PM AEST
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so sad I have felt like this many times. I loved it all but one line really stands out to me. "I best awake before I drown" wow...
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Re: Stranded in Good-byes
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:30:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful lines written with sheer talent.
Yet again you amaze me. :) |
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Re: Stranded in Good-byes
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:38:23 PM AEST
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Subtleties have pulled me down
I best awake before I drown
Very well done! The lines above are exquisite! I'm very impressed and... have this looming feeling that if I heard you read this aloud - you'd knock me over with it. |
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Re: Stranded in Good-byes
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:41:05 PM AEST
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beautifully sad brooke, so moving and well written, hugs n' love nessa
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