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death come
Contributed by
Luinil
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:25:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Death come quickly
Take light, leave shadows
Battle rages inside my skin
Death come swiftly
Crush innocence under foot
Screams go unheard
Death come grimly
Breathe in peace
Guilt bleeds out
Death come now
Kill my conflict
Life ends
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-05-26 16:25:09]
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Re: death come
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:38:34 PM AEST
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| really nice powerful little poem!!! nice one.. |
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Re: death come
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:50:09 PM AEST
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I like the style of this poem in the sense that it becomes smaller and more compact. Nice job.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: death come
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:54:47 PM AEST
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| That was awsome! I love how short the lines are. It makes the poem so much more powerful. I like the message. Look forward to reading more of your work! |
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Re: death come
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by pixie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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Short and sweet, so to speak, you have done a great job here.
Pixie xx |
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