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Snow Flake Sonnet
Contributed by
scottbuttross
on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:02:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This world, it all seems foreign to me
And as each day therein passes me by
Memories past experience yet be
And only I will see through thine own eye
Only a person among the others
With knowledge from generations erstwhile
And here I subsist with all my brothers
My own importance, wrought of denial
My soul a flake in a blizzard of snow
Lost in a deep white cloud with all the rest
And blown along a path I do not know
-Scott E Buttross
Copyright ©2004 Scott E Buttross
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scottbuttross
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2004-05-26 16:02:04]
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Re: Snow Flake Sonnet
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:37:38 PM AEST
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Well done! I like the metaphor in the last stanza.
Keep it up!
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Re: Snow Flake Sonnet
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:40:47 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this am useless at sonnets very jealous - enjoyed the read mate.
feel free to read my poems by the way... |
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