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“Beautiful Maiden!!!”
Contributed by
R.G.Love
on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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“Beautiful Maiden!!!”
Beautiful Maiden, so lovely and fair,
Just how do I woo, win your heart my dear? For, by you, I am taken. Wholly, you have captured me.
You and your wonder, so hath enraptured me,
Such, that I lose all control.
Like a bottomless pit of pleasure, I just fall into you,
And I would like to spend forever there.
I don’t just want a few fleeting moment, I want, years,
A lifetime with you.
I’d like to spend, forever, in your heavenly hue.
And I would give anything, for that chance,
To basks, forever, in your radiance.
Most beautiful lady, you have captured my soul.
I’m most enchanted, by you, and you, I’d like to get know.
Me, totally, you have taken,
Most captivating creature, you beautiful maiden.
Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love
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R.G.Love
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2002-10-11 09:15:00]
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Re: “Beautiful Maiden!!!”
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by R.G.Love on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 09:35:01 AM AEST
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"For, by you, I am taken. Wholly, you have captured me, " Should not be an adjoining line but the third line the poem should read like this,
"Beautiful Maiden, so lovely and fair,
Just how do I woo, win your heart my dear?
For, by you, I am taken. Wholly, you have captuted me..."
It did not catch right in transfer
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Re: “Beautiful Maiden!!!”
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by Lia on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 09:57:19 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful :) |
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Re: “Beautiful Maiden!!!”
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:19:42 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful. I love it.
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Re: “Beautiful Maiden!!!”
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:45:40 PM AEST
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| such a sweet poem . |
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