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Haunted Truths
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Broken! By hindrance of thoughts and paranoia
Awoken! After all the years of self abuse
Trying to peel away all my masks
Dying to show my true self
Insanity lurks just below the surface
Curiosity dies within the shattered shell of my existence
Denied everything I've searched for
Inside I die a little more each day
Trampled by the overwhelming thoughts
Sampled everything I thought could give me hope
Leave! Leave me weak and bleeding
Achieve! I can't achieve what I'm desperately needing
Tear me apart with words of disgrace
Sear me with truths I need to hear
Depression! What I've subscribed to for years
Agression! What festers deep below
Loneliness haunts my every moment
Confess, I confess I can't continue anymore
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-05-26 12:23:58]
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:36:19 PM AEST
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look, i know you may not believe this, but i have been here. i understand it. i am it.
"Trying to peel away all my masks
Dying to show my true self
Insanity lurks just below the surface"
that bit hit me.
good write. great poem, hope you pull through. phil xxx
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:47:25 PM AEST
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straight from the heart.. how i love poetry to be.. i love how you've used rhyme at the start of each line joel.. great stuff as usual.. keep it up..
charxxx |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:03:46 PM AEST
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So many awesome lines that I can't even begin.
Incredible job man.
This is one of the best. |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:34:27 PM AEST
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| wow, this is just an incredible poem |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:39:17 PM AEST
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You always seem to be able to make the most powerful emotionally poems on this site, with such truth and reality and, basically just telling it as it is. SUch honesty and intergrety is a good mark of a good poet.
Great write (I can relate) |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:55:06 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings joel, i think being human we all have had these thoughts, i hope all is well with you, very well written poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:32:15 PM AEST
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Wow!! I love how you've put these words together, I too can relate. "Depression! What I've subscibed to for years" Oh yes, but don't let it beat you, you're not a loser you're a winner!!!!!
Ali xx |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:57:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful wording on this piece. It paints a masterpiece that I can really relate to. Wonderful job.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:53:29 AM AEST
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| awesome! evrything u do rox!!!!!!! how do u do that??? |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:49:22 AM AEST
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| Wow. I could feel your pain in this, and relate to it alot. It's just...wow... |
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Re: Haunted Truths
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:19:33 AM AEST
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wow, very intense write.
I love how you show your emotions through your poetry.. it shows that you are a creative person, and that you know your mistakes and arent afraid to admit them.
keep up the great work, I love reading your poems.
*~Alicia~* |
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