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Decisions
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Why are you still haunting me?
Why can’t I live happily?
I wish you would go away,
Even just for one day.
Your memory is still around,
Pushing away each and every sound,
Of the people that I love.
How I wish I could rise above,
The fear, hatred and pain,
So you wouldn’t be able to gain,
My soul and my life.
I reach for a knife,
My wrists or yours?
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2004-05-26 05:30:03]
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Re: Decisions
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by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:33:25 AM AEST
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a very deep poem indeed,absolutley loved the ending. great write,wonderful read. keep em coming
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Decisions
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:32:20 AM AEST
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| Well done! Brutally honest and impactful. I agree... the ending... wow. |
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Re: Decisions
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:19:19 PM AEST
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| there rists every time :) love ya hun, and im here for ya 24/7 ring me weneva, and u can rise above... and u no wot i think?... i think u already have, u rule xxx |
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