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Sleep in beauty
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:21:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i could muster up that anger and conjour up a scream,
and once im done, ill wake up from that dream,
so when they reach 16,
save them from this fate,
cast that spell,
and let them sleep,
before its far too late.
Copyright ©
ZooYork_Chick
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2004-05-26 05:21:59]
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Re: Sleep in beauty
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:13:35 AM AEST
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| i really like this... very thought-provoking |
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Re: Sleep in beauty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:20:25 AM AEST
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Its short, but it says a lot and provokes thought. I liked the title, and thought you were going to write about not being a 'morning person', or something similar, although this poem was an insightful alternative, nontheless.
Good work.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Sleep in beauty
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by JT on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:41:00 AM AEST
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Short, sweet and to the point. Great write
-jt- |
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