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The Reaper
Contributed by
Chimo
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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See the darkest hour
Watch the hands of time
Breathing down your neck
Looking back your next
Stains of blood are in your eyes
Watch as it fills the carpet red
One last breath before your dead
The reaper lys beneath your bed
Copyright ©
Chimo
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2004-05-25 23:48:09]
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Re: The Reaper
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by thegurl on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:34:42 PM AEST
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Short, and straight to the put, yet oh so effective. I like how you didn't try to draw it out, but let us know what was coming. The reason for nightmares and sleepless nights.
Great Write. thegurl |
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Re: The Reaper
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:46:48 AM AEST
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| intersting. good write, nice flow to it. |
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Re: The Reaper
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:09:10 PM AEST
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| very straight to the point. good writing still. |
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