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Betrail
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:54:32 PM in AEST
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The words you say are hurtful
There like daggers throw my heart;
That cut into my very soul
The pain I go through is to much to bear
But I still go on
Because my strong Will pulls me on
But sometimes it's to much to bear
I reach out to friends
But no one is there
No one will help me through
'cause they tell people I'm no good
They push me away like an old rag doll
They say mean things to me
That break my heart
But when they need help
They come to me and ask for it
'Cause they know I'll always be there for them
Why do they hurt me so
Why do they take pleasure in my pain
Does no one care for me enough to be my friend
Does no one love me enough to be my friend
Will someone help take away my pain
They make plans
Then cancel when your half way there
Or they leave you waiting and don't call
My horoscope is so WRONG
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Re: Betrail
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:34:13 AM AEST
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so sad I can relate to this alot! You ask what I would do.... well tonight Im in a total sucky mood so tonight I would slap the ***** out of them. that may not be a good thing to do so just tell them to toodle and go on without them hurt as it does they dont deserve you and you will go on and find the true friends you deserve. Enjoyable read but sorry for your pain.
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Re: Betrail
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by JT on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:47:02 AM AEST
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Sad and heartfelt write. And these people are your friends? Sounds like your doing too much giving without getting anything in return.
Friendship is a two-way street. Hope you can work it out.
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Re: Betrail
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by IrishPixie8907 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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I can totally relate! I'm going through this right now.
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Re: Betrail
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:57:03 PM AEST
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Good writing... hope things get better for ya soon....
"Does no one care for me enough to be my friend
Does no one love me enough to be my friend"
I do... I care.
'Nuff said.
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