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If Not Love
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:34:05 PM in AEST
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If not Love
When we look back at the road
We’ve traveled together these years
All the peaks and valleys
The rapture and the tears
How will we remember?
Our special place in time
Two souls perfect in harmony?
Dancing to a moments perfect rhyme
I pray we always be remembered
As two unique and gentle spirits
Who for a time and higher purpose
Were brought together to love
Even now our hearts bear faithful witness
Thru our pain and misunderstanding
The love we share and cherish
Will not be sullied or degraded
If this wonderful, special love
We are so blessed to share
Can no longer hold us together
Then perhaps destiny directs us anew
And we have no choice but to follow
For all spirits dance to its melody
And love, even as beautiful as our own
Must submit to its will
So as we look back
Let us not cry nor rage against fate
But celebrate the glory and wonder of love
For if not love, who are we ?
Russ
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Re: If Not Love
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:49:24 PM AEST
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| nice write.. i am going through something similar at the moment so i know where you are coming from with this write |
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Re: If Not Love
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:37:56 AM AEST
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Oohh...very nicely written with a wonderful message.
Thanks for sharing.
:) |
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Re: If Not Love
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:32:58 AM AEST
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"I'd rather love and lose you...than never know your love all at."
Beautifully touching, Russ..... The words above to a song comes to mind here..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: If Not Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:11:53 AM AEST
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| A message so true ... and written beautifully as always ... Jan |
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Re: If Not Love
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:00:45 AM AEST
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beautifully written poem.
I love it.Thanks for sharing that with us.:) |
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Re: If Not Love
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by kimi on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:46:45 PM AEST
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| very expressional, although a bit of a surprise where it suddenly changes from rhyming to plain verse. Not that it alters the meaning :-) |
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