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The Joining
Contributed by
Sylvias
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The waves raped the shore,
Their bloods merged and mingled,
The fruit of their efforts mixing together
To claim the sand
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Sylvias
... [
2004-05-25 19:56:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Joining
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:32:21 AM AEST (User
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deep. short but impactful. good poem |
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Re: The Joining
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cole on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:26:10 PM AEST (User
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It's amazing how you saw that small act of nature in those words. I would have never thought to put those words to the ocean. It's a brilliant poem! |
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