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Psyche
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The lunacy is keeping me together
The blades on the fan are swirling
Way up above my head
The springs below me creak and groan
On this threadbare hospital bed
The doctor comes to see me
Twice everyday
To see if I need anything
Or if I'll ever say
He asks me many questions
But they're all the same to me
I tell him that I'll never tell
So long as he can't see
They all think I'm crazy
They all think I'm not right
But they don't know what haunts my dreams
When I fall asleep at night
Comatose and harmless
Troubled and insane
I've heard them all five times again
The whispers fall like rain
They give me pills, injections
Hoping to find a cure
They've tried so very long its seems
And now they're not so sure
Maybe now they'll leave me
In peace to spend my days
To gossip with the demons
Who haunt my thoughts in plague
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Saitou-sama
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2004-05-25 19:49:48]
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Re: Psyche
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by thegurl on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:48:39 PM AEST
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Great write. The image of the doctor and nurses trying to find a cure, for whats in fact incurable. The way you are.
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Re: Psyche
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:06:35 PM AEST
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| Oh my,i thought i saw you in the court yard as i was looking out the window from my padded room,and after reading this beautifil flow i now it was you[smile] Well done..... |
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