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no one knew
Contributed by
livingdedgurl
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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no one understood her
her mother didnt care
but no one thought the love theyd give..
was her life theyd spare
she cried her lonely nights aways
trapped deep inside her fears
hoping for her only wish..
just to dissapear
no one knew her propblems
or that something was very wrong
but they all woke up one morning
to find that she was gone
the music was too loud
the pills were on the floor
when all she ever wanted
was to be loved a little more
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2004-05-25 19:21:26]
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Re: no one knew
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:41:59 PM AEST
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| upsetting mood right now. thought I would read some poetry. this made me sad even tho I feel like the girl. good write sandy . |
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Re: no one knew
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:59:13 PM AEST
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Ohhh1 I feel this!! I know how you feel! Very good write. My heart goes out to you. PM me if you want.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: no one knew
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:01:23 PM AEST
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OH and I also like Rob Zombie! Wierd as that seems.
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Re: no one knew
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:09:22 PM AEST
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I was just thinking tonight... about how very much can be going on inside a person - and how no one else knows it. Fortunately, poetry lets some of it leak out...
Very sad... but... the feeling is reconizable to many, I think. When you're feeling this way - it seems like it (the feeling) will never go away... like it's impossible to shake it. But it can get better... it does get better.... it just takes time.
Thanks for sharing this... I'm sure it tugged at the heart of anyone that's been there or is there now. |
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Re: no one knew
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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Brilliamt poem, it made me feel very sad as I read it, if you wanted this to be powerful and hard hitting then you have managed it with ease, well done to you.
Pixie xx |
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Re: no one knew
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by bite_me on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:48:31 AM AEST
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wow! lovely written, i really understand!!
Ella
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Re: no one knew
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by Heartfilledblood on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:06:10 AM AEST
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| I feel this poem. Its very powerful too me. It makes me sad but it is a powerful poem too me. Thank you for sharing. |
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