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Still Awakenings
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Careful to keep the hushed silence
Caught between cracks of light behind the door
Surely these clues you left hold little importance
I know your there so what are you hiding for
Candles light blows out
I've woken them
I've broken the cries of innocence
Will the darkness hide me?
Will they find me here?
Softly I cry out
Only you can save me
Uneven breaths escape the night
The moon shines down and holds it splendor
Revealing me under the silver spotlight
They know where I linger
Candles light blows out
I've woken them
I've broken the cries of innocence
Will the darkness hide me?
Will they find me here?
Softly I cry out
Only you can save me
Only you can save me now
Chanting reflects through the empty halls
Desperate as I need you here to haunt me
My only will to stand falls
I close my eyes as their cries engulf me
Fearing for my life’s content
As night enfolds around me
Candles light blows out
I've woken them
I've broken the cries of innocence
Will the darkness hide me?
Will they find me here?
Softly I cry out
Only you can save me
Only you can save me now
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-05-25 18:41:59]
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome I loved it completely. I love the beauty that u weave into all your poems no matter how dark t hey may be.
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:16:30 PM AEST
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great images, kind of spookyish, a fascinating poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:09:15 PM AEST
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| this is awesome. definitely one of my favorite poems. i love the picture you paint with the language. great job. |
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:54:47 PM AEST
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Ohhhh.... I like this a lot. I know I will be reading it over again.... and again.... and...
Very nicely done! |
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:57:58 AM AEST
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Trully amazing poem.......... I always read the dark poems, as I write a few myself, and I always seem to be amazed at the strength and the great poems that people write.
Well done,
pixie xx |
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:40:29 AM AEST
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| Awesome, awesome. Beautiful poem you've got here. Truly a stroke of brilliance. Great imagery. |
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Re: Still Awakenings
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:07:52 PM AEST
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| Why would you want to hide in the dark? Great poem |
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