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~**~Why~**~
Contributed by
Krissie
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:10:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So sad in such a supposably beautiful world?
Why can't I be happy?
they say I never smile, that I always look. . .distant
they say I am so pretty, but how can they lie to my unpretty face?
So why can't I just cry and let the tears flow down my face, into a stream and out of my soul?
So i ask, why won't this sadness just go away?
And cry out of my soul forever. . . ?
Copyright ©
Krissie
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2004-05-25 18:10:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~**~Why~**~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hanno on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST (User
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I CAN relate to this one......Just let it flow, all problems will go...I can assure you of this. |
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Re: ~**~Why~**~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:39:20 PM AEST (User
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Life just doesn't work that way. |
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Re: ~**~Why~**~
(User Rating: 1 ) by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:30:52 PM AEST (User
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I can relate to this. short but powerful. nice! |
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Re: ~**~Why~**~
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:00:11 AM AEST (User
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I can also relate to your words, v.powerful, another great poem from you...............yhings will get better.
takecare
Pixie xxx |
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