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Damn it All

Contributed by BinkCaesar on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:34:39 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

If I die while I'm asleep
I give to you my love to keep.
For my death is not the end,
the everlasting sorrow of a newly lost friend.
What we had was nothing great,
but we both know, you cant control fate.
I seem to have lost all I am.
Myself, an empty shell without a plan.
If, when i go, you feel sorrow,
My temperament, you can borrow.
Take it from me, that "I dont care"
The feeling of not belonging anywhere.
All alone with no one around.
Here in my dimension (dementia) where emotional tragedy abounds.
Now it is apparent, you and I could never be,
a pair called "us" for it must stay "you and me"
At first I felt like I was falling into the unknown,
but now im being pulled down, still all alone
I.shall fly away to my own land,
where everything is in my hands.
And I still won't be happy, you see
fore, it will always just be me.
So I propose one last goodbye,
Just between you and I (unlike everything else)
I will treasure this time together,
Let it float in my mind forever,
But it seems forever isn't gonna last very long,
So will you not sing me one final song?

To all those I Love... I might miss you.
This is Caesar...Out

Copyright © BinkCaesar ... [ 2004-05-25 16:34:39]
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Re: Damn it All (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:44:27 PM AEST
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Why are you leaving, This is the first poem I read by you, whatever it is you can get through it, Don't quit now.

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