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Rain on a beautiful day

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:06:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

By single shell revolve
Thru emptiness so resolve
Captured by what's beneath
Just to learn all your needs

Things aren't quite so niave
With the flowers blooming in the eve
You can find the one that sings
With the words that show you bleed

Now love is just a question mark
Don't think I'm talking of you
Cuz I'm still lost in the dark
Not to mention
I never was that smart
I swear just like my daddy said

That sun is brighter than
My Mommie's Son
Now,
Someday the sun can be
A son, here, here my one

Don't look to search
I will tell you
What you need
So if you do approach
Just ask me

Because at the begining
There was a sign

Two convicts and a deputy
Stole my sign

So beware
But don't be scared

I assure you the love in me
Is but rain on a beautiful day

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-05-25 16:06:50]
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Re: Rain on a beautiful day (User Rating: 1 )
by Troubadour on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:51:33 PM AEST
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i like this poem immensly. because this is the first poem i have seen that does not have a specific order, so to speak.

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