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I've Got a Sun in my Jar
Contributed by
TheNextRobertFrost
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I've got a sun in my jar, see a fire fly.
Look at its wings fluttering around furiously.
Its lights as bright as the moon.
Soon I went out for it to light the night and I let it join its friends,
To fly around and around and around
before the night ends.
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2004-05-25 14:04:14]
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Re: I've Got a Sun in my Jar
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by jan on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this! Short and to the point! I look forward to reading more of your writing. Jan |
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Re: I've Got a Sun in my Jar
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:43:11 PM AEST
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i used to do that as a kid and always let them go too, cute poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I've Got a Sun in my Jar
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by wray on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:42:44 AM AEST
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| Lovely. TheNextRobertFrost was quite a claim but I do like how you handle words. This piece brings to mind how short our lives are - makes me want to run around and around for the next 60 years before my night ends too. |
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Re: I've Got a Sun in my Jar
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:04:26 PM AEST
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Another masterpiece.
It reminds me of me-n-my sisters. We use to catch them and then unleash um in our bed room at night then we'd get in trouble for giggling.
My dad use to tell us if we didn't stop gigling
that he was gonna put us out side with the dogs. That would shut us up for awhile.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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