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Reconnaissance
Contributed by
remy
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:48:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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and first off:
levy a lawsuit on strategic malpractice
dubious in character on a notepad of notice
wait a minute:
i mean does this mean what i think it means to mean?
so sure you're sure and eveybody's sure you think
stupored in sequester
while waiting for a lecture
you had your own way
but your way breaks today
save it!
insisting indictments
bogged down by requirements
no day's like today
there is no other way
take it!
one more
you're so sure
yes take in mistake
more handsome a sum of nothing you'll take.
and yes now:
the program is useless still the method uncanny
the concept overdone as the thoughts you have told me
leading now to:
no motive to build on no stain of evidence
no sodas no coffee nor any hint of sense
offset by orators
you'll be thankful much later
you had your own way
but your way breaks today
save it!
facing now forward
waiting but with no word
no day like today
there is not other way
take it!
springlets of nerve gas
made at every second pass
saving the post drama
save it for any other kind of day.
so stupid it's perfect
so stupid it's perfect
when did it ever dawn on you
that any of this would be worth it?
in ending it's over
in ending come over
pretending that you're just fine
is another wasted second of my time
[some stories best left in the books to find yourself...]
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-05-25 13:48:49]
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Re: Reconnaissance
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:34:18 PM AEST
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Great writing here, whatever inspired it. This doesn't seem too angry... I think I see a lawyer in you... *smiles*
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Re: Reconnaissance
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:14:20 PM AEST
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Remy, man I thought this piece was excellent.
I loved the flow of your words, How you caught me.
Peace out ! |
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