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Daydreams
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:39:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Head in my palm,
Leaning on my elbow,
My eyes flutter shut,
As my imagination grows.
The beach, the sun,
The books, the friends,
The rain, the fun,
The games, the trends.
I travel through time
A smile on my face
A world full of bliss
I'm lost in that place.
Oops, oh no...
Daydreaming again,
I'm called on and shout,
"Um...the answer is 10?"
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2004-05-25 10:39:07]
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Re: Daydreams
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:13:27 PM AEST
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Delightful ending! Good rhythm and rhyme here. Quite nice, meldenya.
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Re: Daydreams
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by JT on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:09:39 AM AEST
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great write. flows well. I can relate, a bit of a dreamer myself.
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Re: Daydreams
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:46:31 AM AEST
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Ever read 'Calvin and Hobbs'? You can probably relate. I know I can.
Take care, Carrie.
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Re: Daydreams
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:07:57 PM AEST
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HAHA! I love daydreaming in class! This is a GREAT poem... its so truthful and blatant. I can really feel the thoughts flowing through this one. Man, what a great one this is!
Bravo and encore!
Love,
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Re: Daydreams
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by buchi on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:39:36 PM AEST
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| Well done daydreamer... |
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Re: Daydreams
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:36:18 PM AEST
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LOL! excellent poem... haven't most of us been there at one time?
God's Blessings,
Em |
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Re: Daydreams
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by Seans_Girl on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:34:04 AM AEST
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haha. I know exactly what you mean! I did that all the time except they never called on me. Thank god.
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