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My Secret Rendevous
Contributed by
thumper
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:22:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Sometimes, I find myself slipping away
In the middle of the afternoon
To have a passionate love affair
I run to a secret rendevous
This man I meet is my dream come true
He's warm and sweet and loving
He cares for me deeply, not like you
So, I run to my secret rendevous
He makes me smile, he makes me blush
And loves me from top to bottom (eek)
His kisses and caresses make me blush
When I run to my secret rendevous
I yearn to be with him all the time
But I can't 'cause I'm with you
So I get with him whenever I can
When I run to my secret rendevous
I find myself a quiet spot
Somewhere I won't be disturbed
And drift away to my dreams of you
My husband, in my secret rendevous
It's you I long to be with
Your touch I ache for most
At a time when we were crazy in love
So, I slip away to my secret rendevous
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-05-25 09:22:48]
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:52:52 AM AEST
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A secret rendezvous is something that most people dream about. You gave it a nice touch with your husband at the ending.Good solid poem full marks.
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:38:32 AM AEST
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| awwwwwwwww well done! |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:02:00 PM AEST
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This poem is so neat........we all have our little secrets.......and places secure where we can go without really being there. I loved the surprize in your poem......made it really come alive. Made me think......
Great work
enjoyable too
consue |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:53:55 PM AEST
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precious:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:39:26 PM AEST
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| sorry folks I made a typo, the third set should read" His kisses and caresses make me flush" not blush. Oi vey! lol |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:19:21 AM AEST
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| very neatly written..very beautiful and precious..venkat |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:19:22 AM AEST
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| very neatly written..very beautiful and precious..venkat |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:15:47 PM AEST
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| For every few poems of sad endings their are always happy ones to make up for them. I am glad your poem is a happy ending. |
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Re: My Secret Rendevous
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by HellsLibrarian on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:03:32 AM AEST
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| This is so wistful. Well written. Good job, thumps. |
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