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Crossroads
Contributed by
jt
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Deceiving your dreams for nothing
Believing the lies you’ve been told
Waiting for a fleeting glimpse
Of the one you can turn to and hold
Don’t let them see the tears that fall
Don’t let them see under the mask
Don’t let them too close as to hurt you
Don’t answer the questions they ask
Stopped at a crossroad, two paths to choose
Which one to take, which one to follow
One leaves you charged and alive
The other one, cold and hollow
The pressure of indecision so great
Legs bend and buckle with the strain
I cannot hold on, I cannot relive
I cannot go on with this pain
And then she’s there before me
In the glory that shines from within
Then once again I wake up from this dream
And wait for the hurt to begin.....
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2004-05-25 09:16:11]
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Re: Crossroads
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by UnfallenTears on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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| This is good, it does a great job of catching emotions. I loved it. |
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Re: Crossroads
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:28:42 AM AEST
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We all at one time or another come to those crossroads. We sadly do no always take the right path but we can retrace our steps and take another road. Good emotional poem
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Re: Crossroads
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by jaavys on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:36:25 AM AEST
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| well this was a plesant surprise. I read three this morning and can't help but think that the quality of our poetry has gone up a notch. let yours be the standard. |
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Re: Crossroads
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:32:26 PM AEST
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Good poem, very touching. I know this feeling.
pixie xxx |
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Re: Crossroads
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:55:18 PM AEST
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well written, great message:) hugs n' love nessa
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