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She Cries
Contributed by
tamilyn
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:05:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She cries at night when she turns out the light
And there's nobody there to turn to
She cries when she sees all the lovers out there
Their love so tender and true
Her eyes fill with tears when she thinks of the years
That have left her so scared and alone
At night in her sleep her dreams make her weep
As she harvests the seeds that she's sown
Yet in her minds eye she's done nothing but try
To cascade her life with hope
It's crazy it seems that only in her dreams
Does she have the will to cope
She tries to compare all the the trouble out there
To the turmoil in her own life
She'd give anything just to wear a gold ring
And the chance to be somebody's wife
She stares with disdain at a woman in pain
Each time she looks in the glass
She struggles with thought in the web where she caught
All the bad memories of the past
It's hard to find truth when your heart is so blue
And the mist is so thick in your eyes
But again tonight when she turns out the light
She'll drift off to sleep as she cries
Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004
Copyright ©
tamilyn
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2004-05-25 06:05:23]
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Re: She Cries
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by Ravisada on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:27:54 AM AEST
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"all the bad memories of the past,
its hard to find truth when your heart
is so blue"
its quite true and you have written it
well.
thanks for sharing with me
Ravi |
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Re: She Cries
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:16:46 AM AEST
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| there was such an excellent flow to that poem. i could see that women sitting there crying alone. you have a real knack at puttin life into words |
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Re: She Cries
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:27:14 AM AEST
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As I read this I could hear the words being sung... it's reads kinda like a song lyric... ust got a flow about it... excellent work... keep writing... such a joy to read...
~Donna~ |
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