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Nothing
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:39:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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nothing...like the void that fills my soul
the nothingness is the only thing i cant let go
silence...like the answer i get when i ask "should I live"
emptiness the feeling i will never be rid
where is the love to feel my void
to be held and cared for not toyed
i wish something would complete me
and not leave me on my hands and knees
i wish that what i love loved me
and not leave me feeling empty
enough broken hearts left me unchanged
enough knives in my back to know real pain
i would give the world to know the love you feel
to take everything i wanted and make them real
i look at the empty void in my soul....blackness all around
I've searched an eternity for true love...nothing i have found
the best always turn out like the rest
and im left...staying second best
to be number one yeah thats the life for me
i want that dream...but nothing i still see
in darkness here i lay.....will my light come soon?
loyalty,is what i crave...but they still remain untrue
i am the loser branded from birth to destiny
i am a nothing..so please,leave me be
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Vermillion
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2004-05-25 05:39:23]
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Re: Nothing
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:30:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. I love how the words make the poem come alive, they send strong emotions resonating around them.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Nothing
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by RavenMarieKrashauna on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:45:02 AM AEST
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| Intense....thats all I can say |
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Re: Nothing
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST
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aw, that poem makes me want to hug you and help you find someone great like i have. a lot of the time people who have found someone that good dont deserve it, and then that person they have is so good, too good to leave even. and they become like the one they are with because they are so dedicated even tho the other is not. i wish people who were good could all find the hurt such as the person in this poem has and then heal them and stay with them because people like that who actually want love and have tried to find it but were unable deserve it usually. i wish there were more relationships like the one i have out there for people. i know i'm very lucky...
i love this poem it really speaks such strong emotions, that i used to feel all the time. awesome, you're such a talented writer. |
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