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Contributed by
Vermillion
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:36:37 AM in AEST
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I知 full of rage but yet I知 so hollow
I cannot fill my hunger with the sins I swallow
I have so much anger, but I知 so empty inside
I cannot fill this void with lust and lies
I try and try but still I fail
an invisible succubus, my own gateway to hell
as my spirit builds with madness, there痴 this hole in my soul
it cannot be healed with warm words cause inside its oh so cold
an infinity of negativity, that痴 consuming my mind
I add so much fuel to my fire and I知 running out of time
soon this black hole will engulf my very being
then I will fill it with others blood, rampant chaos is what I知 seeing
the blanket of darkness is covering my eyes
letting me see the things that will soon arise
I know I知 going crazy so of course I知 not insane
I know the madness that is soon to follow, to fill the pit I致e made
if love could fill the void, that would be divine
but yet....I知 still so empty inside
Copyright ﾂｩ
Vermillion
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Re: Empty
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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| Funny you should ask, im about to submit a poem, has something to do with holes in souls. nice poem, could be better but still good. 3/5 x |
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Re: Empty
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:37:49 AM AEST
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I think its an excellent poem... yeah it could be tweeked here and there... but what poem doesn't need tweeking... all in all this poem was a joy for me to read...
I think we all have holes in our souls... some maybe so tiny that they're invisible and yet others so gaping that they will never heal...
U did a fine job... keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Empty
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by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:24:02 PM AEST
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I totally relate to this....
I love the part about " i know i'm going crazy so of course im not insane"
on a side note, i seriously love it when i get to read a new poem of yours, highlight of the lunch break.
I took to reading Jigsaw Child to my sister
Vanessa |
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Re: Empty
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:24:59 AM AEST
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I've felt that way before.
And it truely sucks!
Your a great writer, and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: Empty
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:26:03 PM AEST
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| keep looking for the love that can really fill it. love for yourself is also necessary. very insightful poem, good job. |
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