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come the fall

Contributed by Cancer on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



come the fall
it'll all be dead
nothing left to save
just time for rcome the fall
it'll all be dead
nothing left to save
just time for regret
lots of things
won't mean as much
anymore
come the fall
come the fall

come the fall
"cold" won't begin to describe
the atmosphere of things
each whispered "why"
laced with frost
tears of sleet sting the face
like slivers of silver come to replace
the golden hues of forgotten summer

come the fall

come the fall
I'll be gone
but not in a way I can explain
it's just the way things are

come the fall
bring it down
and finish what I couldn't start
do all the things I never could
be everything I need
and paint me red with sin

come the fall
you'll see it all
(but it won't be what you wanted
just everything you already knew)
I知 just so ***** sick of it all
and caring never felt this lame

come the fall
I知 going down
and I値l bet you'd kill to stop me
cuz you're just like me
to a degree
and I知 just like everything I hated
everything we thought was dead

come the fall
I値l be where I belong
though I知 not sure what that means
one of two
and I think I know who
will decide which one it is egret
lots of things
won't mean as much
anymore
come the fall
come the fall

come the fall
"cold" won't begin to describe
the atmosphere of things
each whispered "why"
laced with frost
tears of sleet sting the face
like slivers of silver come to replace
the golden hues of forgotten summer

come the fall

come the fall
i'll be gone
but not in a way i can explain
it's just the way things are

come the fall
bring it down
and finish what i couldn't start
do all the things i never could
be everything i need
and paint me red with sin

come the fall
you'll see it all
(but it won't be what you wanted
just everything you already knew)
i'm just so ***** sick of it all
and caring never felt this lame

come the fall
i'm going down
and i'll bet you'd kill to stop me
cuz you're just like me
to a degree
and i'm just like everything i hated
everything we thought was dead

come the fall
i'll be where i belong
though i'm not sure what that means
one of two
and i think i know who
will decide which one it is




Copyright ツゥ Cancer ... [ 2004-05-24 22:06:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: come the fall (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:04:22 PM AEST
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I like... a very interesting read. I love how it keeps reapeating "come the fall". A very nice piece, I'd love to see more.


Re: come the fall (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:27:13 PM AEST
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this was realy good don't what to say excepted that it reminded me of 'My December' or w/e by Linkin Park don't know why it did, but it did.

Bobo (Joel)




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