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''Miscontrued''
Contributed by
Rosie
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why did you lead me to the place where my world ends
How do you expect me to hold on
With every breath my heart twists and bends
trying so hard not to be your pawn
And though I know its not you I blame
I try to make sense of every event
And to you this may all be the same
But my perspective will be forever bent
Copyright ©
Rosie
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2004-05-24 21:48:12]
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Re: ''Miscontrued''
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:51:49 PM AEST
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Interesting . . . I like it. As emotional as "Intentions" and you bring up some good points. Interesting ideas expressed, and well expressed at that. "And though I know its not you I blame" . . .
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Re: ''Miscontrued''
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:09:35 PM AEST
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Oh! there are so many of us singing the same song tonight! Seems like I've read a few poems with the same theme...
I try to make sense of every event
This particular line grabbed me. Re-playing it, questioning it... I get that.
Thanks for this! |
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