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''Falling To Grace''
Contributed by
Rosie
on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The wind brushes my cheek like a blanket,
soft and smooth. I am floating,
with no purpose, just searching...
When I look up, I see you.
I lose my sense. You smile, I blush.
my heartbeat begins to Race, trying to
break free, trying to bring me to you,
my heart knows, I know. I move closer,
you lean in, I close my eyes,
everything stops... We fall,
deeper and deeper. holding on to
nothing but each other, keeping one
another alive. I breathe, You exhale,
my heart beats, Your blood pumps.
Suddenly we crash, we walk away, The
world mangled behind us. Our former
lives dead..I look at you a little scared..."Is this heaven?" you ask,
then I look at you, You smile,
I blush, we know.
Copyright ©
Rosie
... [
2004-05-24 21:41:49]
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Re: ''Falling To Grace''
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:46:56 PM AEST
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| wow... such an enchanting first kiss... this is so beautifully written... great job |
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Re: ''Falling To Grace''
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:57:51 PM AEST
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Like Daniela said, beautifully written. A fantastic description of love's simple and sweet beginnings. Perfectly done and it captured love so very well . . . I loved the part that said,
"We fall,
deeper and deeper. holding on to
nothing but each other, keeping one
another alive. "
Excellent job.
--Nora |
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Re: ''Falling To Grace''
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:43:20 PM AEST
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Yes indeed... beautifully written... excellent job...
Keep at it... U got the gift...
~Donna~ |
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Re: ''Falling To Grace''
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:38:31 PM AEST
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excellent, sooo beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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