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Life of Sadness
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:39:23 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Life of Sadness
I can't live this life anymore
Not the way I have so far
I can't live this life of lies
When it's ending right now
I can't live this life of sadness
Not anymore
This pain increased too much
To bear alone
That's how the story goes
With every moment of bliss
Caused by ignorance
I received a moment of pain
To balance it out in the end
Life is binary code
Nothing more
Life is negatives and positives
And you end up being a zero
Or a one
You're either dying while living
Or a member of the afterlife
Your binary code went to zero
But this life of sadness
Is a negative and there's a positive
I won't follow your example
And become another zero
When ones are rarer
I won't follow your example
And give up to live
In your nonexistent world
I won't follow your example
Dying because of a negative
When you had a positive
Binary code deleted with a zero
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2004-05-24 21:39:23]
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Re: Life of Sadness
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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Oooooh . . . very, VERY nice job. I loved the metaphor . . . life as a binary code is a great one and really makes you think. Wonderful, intriguing, intuitive poem. Nicely done.
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Re: Life of Sadness
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 12:15:51 PM AEST
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| Great post..Again since I am testing our theory on comments.I am only posting one one your right now..But this one should have got more comments..But once more this sows me this site has more cliques then anything else.. |
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