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Pieces
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I keep finding pieces of myself
I’d tell you if I thought you’d care
It’s illogical but still it’s true
I find pieces almost everywhere
I keep finding pieces of myself
Twisted, hidden in a written verse
Lurking too in the corner of memory
Being broken has been my curse
I keep finding pieces of myself
I must go back and retrace my step
Oh! That I could be like others
And know where they were all kept
I keep finding pieces of myself
They were scattered about in the past
I’m collecting them all in a drawer
Searching until I find the very last
I keep finding pieces of myself
I’m completing the puzzle somehow
No more pieces falling here and there
I put myself back together now
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Silent-No-More
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2004-05-24 17:48:58]
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Re: Pieces
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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wonderfully inspiring poem! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:11:31 PM AEST
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That is a very well worked piece. It was very expressive and had a great ending.
Well done (again).
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Re: Pieces
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by Elena on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:17:06 PM AEST
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| Very fine. |
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Re: Pieces
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by livingdedgurl on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:32:02 PM AEST
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| how cute its nicely written... |
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Re: Pieces
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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Very well done, I love the writing style used.
This is a very well constructed poem.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Pieces
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by secretwind on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:23:54 PM AEST
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| Well Done... |
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Re: Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:58:00 AM AEST
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I love the title, and the way the words all flow from one thought to another. Nice work you have done here in conveying what alot of us feel...broken into pieces...in hopes of finding the right piece that fits in.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Pieces
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by swiftsouljah on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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great poem... "finding peices of myself" oh vivid that is to me right now... everydays an adventure i never know what ill find... all too often i find that im still broken...
great job
wayne |
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Re: Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 02:48:47 AM AEST
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I love the way this is pieced together.....no pun intended. "I’m completing the puzzle somehow"
The use of metaphors to explain your broken self and the twist of hope at the end. Absolutely brilliant, Snemmers.
Timber
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Re: Pieces
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by windowguy on
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| I like this. Endearing read. |
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