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FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:23:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Kisses in the rain dewdrops sweet
One day in paradise love replete
Knew of a love as noble as a knight
Flew amongst the clouds so bright
Felt his lips so warm and tender
Touched his body in all its splendor
Temptation island sandy beaches
Ocean pearls nectar peaches
Words speak volumes in communication
Speak of me with tender love and elation
Sleepless nights so near yet so far
Glory is my quest guided by a star
Words I long to whisper dreams to console
Mi Manchi "I miss you" my Italian soul
Cara mia, ti voglio bene "My darling I love you"
No regrets deep secrets forever eyes of blue
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sweetangeluk
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by Colleen on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:39:43 PM AEST
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| I really like your poem! Nice job! |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:17:44 PM AEST
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That was beautiful. You put me in a quiet, romantic, passion-filled world. Thank you.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:43:26 PM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:28:56 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful-- and of course I love that it's a kiss in the rain ;-). Wonderful poem, hope to read more from you. Bravo and encore!
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:40:40 PM AEST
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Thank you all very much for the beautiful comments.
Brought tears to my eyes reading some of the replies thank you all again.
Love sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by bernard on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:12:34 AM AEST
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| beatiful words in a lovely poem full marks from bernard. |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:32:01 AM AEST
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What a delightful read!! You have used your words really well..
Jenni |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by inoc on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:39:29 AM AEST
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what a splendid write
*kisses in the rain dewdrops sweet*
I love that line!
cheers! |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:55:59 AM AEST
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Oh, how I know this undying love and passion! Sweetangeluk, this is absolutely beautiful! Your words paint a vivid picture in my mind, and I enjoy that very much. Thank you for this riveting write! And thank you once more for commenting on my works, they are very appreciated! Much love! An enchanting piece, very romantic! How I wish I still had this love! You're very lucky; cherish this love, before it goes away! Again, marvelous, perfect! You'll be seeing more of me, no doubt! Much love! Your newest fan and friend,
FleurdeSang |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:34:25 AM AEST
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| This was such a great write that it seemed as if I read it before. You have a great poetic style. |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:48:16 PM AEST
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a simple beauty stated so well, bravo dolce
angelelauk . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: FOREVER EYES OF BLUE
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:27:09 PM AEST
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Your writing just gets better and better. This poem was so peace filled. So relaxing, i want to be on that beach now!! Lol. Great job.
~Alucia~ |
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