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Loneliness
Contributed by
bopeep
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:24:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Loneliness is the empty house on the corner with cracked paint and dead grass.
It is the dry peanut butter sandwich you had for lunch without any jelly.
It rings in your ears like the quiet cry of a child in pain.
It feels as if you are standing one a pile of a dead bodies after a bloody war.
Loneliness brings the smell of the doctor’s room to your nose.
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2004-05-24 12:24:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Loneliness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Troubadour on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:30:40 PM AEST (User
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i think that your poem characterizes loneliness superbly |
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