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grey world
Contributed by
tearlessmists666
on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:10:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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some undicided emotions,
and a falsely interpreted fate.
everythings against your exsistence,
leading for you only to hate.
the sky's turning grey in the day time,
yet the world still goes round 'n round.
the north winds come with a bustle,
not yet does it make a slight sound.
the grey world is my only survival,
though its slowly crumbling away.
my only imagonary life saver,
will not be present some day.
there are no undicided emotions,
no falsely interpreted fates.
nothings against my exsistence,
and leading oone nowheres to hate.
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tearlessmists666
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2004-05-24 11:10:31]
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Re: grey world
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by princess8383 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:14:27 AM AEST
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Very interesting poem......I like it :)
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Re: grey world
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by jan on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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| Thought provocking with a very good flow. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: grey world
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by jan on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:24:03 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking with a very good flow. I enjoyed reading it. |
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