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Fallen Tears
Contributed by
alwys2nv
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:43:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As i listen im in so much pain
it hurts so much im going insane
they told me you killed your self
for certian reasons to be unknown
i know the reasons because they always shown
you were never happy
even with me you still thought it
family hating you
friends leaving you
you always told me "me too"
i never under stood it
but i had reasons to doubt
but tonight you had died
and its to late i already found out
i wish i could of told you
that i loved you very much
but i dont have to worry
soon i can feel your touch
even if it means taking my own life
i want us to be together
as i write my ltter to all my family and friends
i cant help but to show my tears
knowing we will be together again
signed with my heart
sealed with a kiss
written with love
always will be missed
pen touches paper
fallen tears meet with skin
after tonight we'll be together again
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2004-05-24 09:43:59]
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Re: Fallen Tears
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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Off beat on a couple parts, but really good message. Good job keep it up...
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Re: Fallen Tears
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:53:58 AM AEST
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| thats so sad...please think about things before you do anything. good write. phil xxx |
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