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A Day in the Life of Hope

Contributed by jt on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Charmed into insanity
Im falling with no brakes
Listening to the whispers
That tell me my mistakes
Confusion
I dont have inside what you must take
The things you need from me
Im unable to make

I look inside your eyes
To see your feelings
The scars within my mind
Forever never healing
Im holding onto you
And with this hurt Im dealing
And still you knock me down
Why arnt you revealing?

How do you do what you do to me
Im pleading
This growing pain inside of me
Off the hurt its feeding
Youve cut me deep inside myself
And now Im slowly bleeding
A crop of understanding
Thats begging for a seeding

You never know how much you mean
I dont know if you will
And yet I sit here wishing
And hoping that you still
Feel for me
I always ask why what we had youd kill
My heart is not a takeaway
You cant just leave a bill

Im kidding myself
To think I dont need you
The dark of night is menacing
Will I see it through
The dark is in my life
What am I to do
I still need your warmth
I hope you see this true

Copyright © jt ... [ 2004-05-24 08:38:35]
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Re: A Day in the Life of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:41:06 AM AEST
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Good strong poem full marks for a good read.

bernard.

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