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Falling
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:21:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Falling into what is not
Falling into a state of rot
With feelings twisted in
Red ropes dat
Intwine around my heart
Tight!
Im falling from my flight
Landing to feel numb
Im falling into what is not
Im falling just to rot
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2004-05-24 05:21:07]
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Re: Falling
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:25:24 AM AEST
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| very good poem.I like it. |
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Re: Falling
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:04:42 AM AEST
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| good write. i like the way you repeat the first and last lines. phil xxx |
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