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My Lord, I want to see you.....

Contributed by ravisada on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:42:56 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Oh my Lord, Oh my great Lord
I want to see you, I want to talk to you
Let me have your spiritual lessons
My days cannot be bright with out your precepts

Oh my Lord, Oh my great Lord
I want to see you, I want to be with you
Let me have your heavenly shelter
My days cannot be safe with out your shelter

Oh my Lord, Oh my great Lord
I want to see you, I want to hold you
Let me have your hands for help
My days cannot be pleasant with out your love

Oh my Lord, Oh my great Lord
I want to see you, I want to walk with you
Let me to the right path to walk
My days cannot be finished with out your truth.


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam




Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-05-24 02:42:56]
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Re: My Lord, I want to see you..... (User Rating: 1 )
by sunnyrainbows on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:45:26 PM AEST
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its good that u can express ur desires through poetry...
got some mistakes in there though...
"without" not "with out"...
and some lines have repetitive words...
such as rhyming shelter with shelter and having two "walk"s in two lines in a row (4th stanza)
just my thoughts =)




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