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If...
Contributed by
WildSwan
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:34:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If…
By R.H.Avecilla
If fate ever parted us dear,
And in the dark we lose our way.
Would you stop to rest a while?
Think of me, you left behind a mile.
If on your way you find new love,
May it be greater than what I have.
Let me disappear in your new happiness,
My touch vanishes on your lover’s caress.
If things fail with your someone new,
Don’t be afraid to seek another start.
For only the best is what you deserve,
Only you whom he must tenderly serve.
If it really doesn’t work after all,
Stand after each fall, cry and then stop!
There was once dazzled by your charm?
Look back, you’ll see me with an open arm.
Copyright ©
WildSwan
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2004-05-24 01:34:32]
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Re: If...
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by md on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:03:35 AM AEST
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| As the saying goes, "if you love somebody set them free, if it comes back to you... it's yours; if not, it wasn't meant to be". |
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Re: If...
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:09:09 AM AEST
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| Great right. I had to go through the "if you love something let it go" stage. It is rough but as the saying goes "Things happen for a reason" even if we may not see the reason at the time. Keep up the great work. |
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Re: If...
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by JT on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:24:30 AM AEST
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Leave the birdcage door open......
great write
-jt- |
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