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Till Death Do Us Part
Contributed by
brigitte7735
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The constant yearning of destinies unkown
The seperate directions we seem to have grown
The emptiness I feel when you leave me alone
What I assume you felt but have never shown
The hurtful words I swear you dont mean
The distance we have, the signs I wont see
The words I long for, love's selfless decree
The man I dreamed of, the man you'll never be
The touch of your body laying there at night
The heat and silence making everything right
The wordless mending of the constant fight
The ecstasy created before the break of light
When you dont look and you dont even care
Stripped naked and desolate I am laying there
Being consumed by your disapproving glare
The pain you cause is more then I can bear
The truth that screams from deep in my core
The moment is over, you dont love me anymore
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Re: Till Death Do Us Part
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:34:29 PM AEST
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| A very painful situation I hope everythings ok now.Christina |
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Re: Till Death Do Us Part
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:51:56 AM AEST
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So full of emotion. It bleeds with pain. Wonderful write.
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Re: Till Death Do Us Part
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:35:13 AM AEST
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Painfully emoted.
Very real write.
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Re: Till Death Do Us Part
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:29:42 PM AEST
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Such a message with the power and passion this holds within its lines comes but once every millenium, a thouroughly powerful piece, I feel that bite coming ever closer, lips gently carressing the heart of the monster, teeth ready to devour all in its path, this should be an interesting road to watch blossom.
An amazing piece, full of emotion and meaning techincally perfect in every manner another timeless write
Luke |
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