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(emotions are sorrow)
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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So here i sit again staring; again
here i sit, this
gets more redundant
every time.
Slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time.
What did you do today?
[I played Vice City for nine hours.]
Is that all you did all day?
[No. I took a break to play on the computer
for several hours...]
So... you just played video games...?
[No. I slept for a few hours, then stared listlessly
into space
slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time...
It is very hot today.
[I don't care.]
A day in the life of a broiling turkey, eh?
[I suppose.]
You know, you seem like one
who has difficulty finding the beauty and joy
that exists in the world.
[Ah. that's really great. 'Scuse me whilst i take a second to actually give a *****.]
breath is shallow
head in hands, i sit
(and i stare)
no more words, this is over,
this is done,
(i don't care)
Beneath the ocean, on the sand I lie,
waiting, awaiting...
...Nevermore will I feel...
(emotions are sorrow)
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2004-05-23 22:23:49]
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:30:47 PM AEST
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Genius, i love the way this is set up.
Vanessa |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by waos on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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| sa-weet is all i can say. i loved it so much! awesome |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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breathtaking:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by secretwind on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:37:46 AM AEST
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| Interesting....good flow and as someone already said good setup. |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:58:58 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful poem. Amazing. |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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this had me awestruck.. i love the way you present your poems, they're so original and so beautiful.. i loved this one.. can very much relate..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: (emotions are sorrow)
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:55:14 AM AEST
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| You told me you hated this... You must really hate my poems, you're amazing!! *****in amazin... x |
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